Heart of Rhyme

This is a poster I made for the short film "Heart of Rhyme" directed by Cory Bowles . this is actually the second iteration, the first being below. but after I finished I took a few elements out and found simpler worked more effectively, I think. Though I still like the one below, the above image seems to grab me more. It was a pleasant surprise but I couldn't help feeling a little down about having to travel all that way to find out walking back a little might have been the better move.